by Maria
2 words i cried :( |
Wow that was a powerful poem. I started to get teary there for a second. I wish I could write as good as you do. You are, as I've said before, very very talented. |
by MissSideways
Ohhh i cried!! |
by Paige
OMG :/ This poem really is soo sad :( so touching and meaningful its amazing how long someone will wait for the one they love :) amazing work truly xxx |
by aDORKable x3
Oh, wow this poem makes me wanna cry really hard!! It's such a well written piece!! Please, don't stop writing!! |
by shobhana kumar
Beautiful! tragic! |
by Juliana
THISS POEEMMM IISSS GOOODDD i was aboutt 2 crryyyyy .. cuz i juss lost my lovee anywayysss keep up the good workk && keep writing ill keep readin ur poemss |
by Patricia
I luv it 5/5 |
by -v-neE-
AwWww..~~ sObx sObx..sO saD...~~ but very well writteN..love all ur poeMz..~ ^^ |
Awesome! I like it :) 5/5 |
by Jess
OMG!!!!!!!!! tear tear tear. Thsi si so sad but so good. You kept a good flow and I LOVE IT. 5/5 |
Awww! That was sooo sad! That's wonderful! |
Okay, Wow!!! You are an amazing poet!! AGAIN! Your flow was so rhythmic and steady. It's a very sad story, but you put it together so well! Your talent is enviable, very much so. Great job, I love the poem!! Keep writing! 5/5 |
Awwww!!!! |
by awww
*tear drop* ... great poem... sad but great... keep it up and be strong |
by -xeinn-
GOSh. dis pOem is rEaLLy tOUchiNg.. |
Another great poem. I loved the story, and flow. You seem to have a natural gift for story telling, and poetry. Also, I noticed that the last two poems I've read by you envolved two lovers, one which dies in a car accident, during the night. Another thing I've noticed is that the two pieces I've read are equallybrillaint. |
by Wallace
Very good poem, The first few lines grabbed my attention and the ending really hit me. I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5. |
by Wallace
Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. |
Wonderful |