Wow i know you wrote this so long ago but I still had to comment that this has to be one of the most drepressing and shocking poem I ever read. This poems is beyond Excellent.

The last line had me near crying-beautiful first and last love- i love it ^.^

I wish there was a guy like that in real life!
I love this poem its bittersweet

OMG I LOVE THIS POEM IT IS SOOO SAD BUT I LOVE IT AND USUALLY IF IT HAS A SAD ENDING I DONT LIKE THEM. I LOVE YOUR WORK KEEP IT GOING AROUND.

Amazing piece you. Great job as usual. Keep it up!! 5/5

Its start by being sweet and @ the end it sad but it well writen

So beautiful and so touching i love your poems so much

I loved this poem....it was realli good...i hope to read more of ur writings

This is definitly a peice of art. i'm very impressed.

Oh my God. this poem is like the greatesstt. I love it, thats so saddd i am cryin right now. very touching. love it. keep it upp

I have no idea if i've comented before but i keep reading it over and over and it's always so beautiful ;_; your a beautiful poet. really sad and cute as.

Omg i was bout to cry i thought it was happy =[[ its a great poem

One of the best poems I have read on this website.

*Cries*
This is so awesome!!!
I loved it!!!!
It made me cry, seriously!!!!!!
I love this poem!!!!
This is going into my favorites!!!! XD

~*Qistina~*

Awwwez that was soo damn AWESOME! :)

Waahh!!...i can't understand my feelings when i read this poem....it makes me cryT_T....but its nice!!^_^

This is a very good piece of writing great job!!!

O my god that was so sweet. did u make that up. wow your a great poet. i loved it. but it was sad

This is so sad : [

That was a exellent poem! That's a winner lol it was great and so full of love and strong emotions. Makes you sad to think of that and picture what had happened. It's like a movie and i think it is sad but wonderful at the same time.