I love it, has beautiful lines, and a nice message, keep writing.

Amazing talent

I have to agree with kayla, the flow isnt there because i was expecting the rhyming scheme to continue through the whole poem.
Also i dont really understand "Take it all, Into a new hold" it just doesnt sound right to me.
It does need a little work but its a solid first effort.

A good poem.I like the positive exhortation to Blue Eyes to be strong and courageous.I love 'clench your spirit in a new fist' a good play on words.

Thank you for your comment to me.As you asked, I am not 52 I'm 58. I wrote that poem for all the youngies on the site who are feeling weak and despairing at being treated badly by someone they are emotionally attached to. Nobody should be allowed to control or manipulate or intimidate or destroy another human being just because that person loves them. You are a very good writer I could not believe you are 12.