Good poem.
5/5 definately.
Your a good writer keep it up.
Check out all my stuff. You seems kinda like me. and you may like my poems.
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JP

Nice work.. Anyone that makes you feel that bad doesnt deserve to be your rescuer.. I loved this because i can relate 100%. If you ever wanna talk you know where to find me. 5/5

I loved it. I can really relate. Thanks for the comment. Your poems are good too.

I really love this! ur s0o talent! all ur stuff ROCKS!! well yea wonderful job! 5/5
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kandie

Awwww...ur soooo heartbroken...don't give up...keep holding on...u'll c he'll be back...they alwayz come back...i told u ...i'm here 4 u...5/5...
kisses

I've lost my soul too...haha...that is why I read this poem...nah...this is good...I can relate to it...I know how you feel...stay strong hun...things will change...

I love the ending you put on this, this guy or whoever dosnt sound like he deserves you but hey if you love him go for it, awesome poem 5/5

Nice poem! 5/5

I love how you use compare your emotions to other things in this poem! It paints an excellent picture of what your feeling and really gives the reader an understanding fo what your talking about! Great job!