I like your poem. I like it that you ended with HOPE which is one of the important things we should never be robbed of. I like it that you make pjilosophical observations in a short and concise way. Should 'were' on your last line read 'where' and could 'Truth' be at the end of the line above? Layout and spelling etc can be distracting or helpful, like a frame on a picture.

This is great, so true, love it! 5/5