Lonley(Someone)

by RadianceInReverse   Oct 18, 2005


Some times I feel lonely
Like no one can see me
Like I'm all alone
No one to comfort me or to say it's OK
No one to hug me or say they love me
Sometimes I wish I wasn't so lonely
I know I have friends and family
But I feel like I have
No one to hold me
When I'm feeling down
Or to lift me up
When I'm about to hit the ground
Someone to say its gonna be OK
When the day isn't goin my way
Someone to make me laugh
When I'm about to cry
Someone to say I'll always be here
When you need someone to talk to
But all I really want
Is for someone to get rid my loneliness!

Thanx for reading my poem(plz comment)!!!!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Very Lovely, somethign we can alrealte to, Now for my evil words of wisdom, Up the diction in your poetry, I tend to have a dictionary or the thusorus*jenny cant spell* around while Im writing so when i edit it I can put more fitting words in. Keep it up and coming hunny!

    Love Jenn

  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Hey...this is nice...i feel that way too...can't help feeling lonely when no ones around...