Short but deep. I gave it a 5/5 because of its dark, honest feeling.

Good Writing!
beth

What a great write! I enjoyed every single word of this poem. It is unqiue and the rhyming couplets are wondrous! The diction and imagery are fantastic and truly original as well. This poem is excellent indeed.

It was very good, although i didnt agree to some of the ways you rhymed it and the way you used your words...it kinda throws off the flow.
but anyways, i think it deserves a 4/5

I was good, however some of the word usage could have been different and some of the rhyming kind of seemed forced or awkward. I like it overall, so I think a 4/5 would be good. :)

God Bless
Saiya

Says who?? i reli lykd it.. it was very sincere and it rhymed (lol.. im a supporter of rhyming poems :P) i reli lykd ur last line.. gr8 conclusion
take care
Nannoush

Somewhy, when writers write something good, they always seem to think it's no good.
5/5
Tim