Falling To Pieces

by Amba   Oct 18, 2005


Bit by bit, one by one
my now heartless body, becoming undone
I used to be me, i used to be the sweetest,
but needless to say, I'm falling to pieces

piece by piece, thought after thought
my feeling less body, oh so distraught
I'm dyeing so slowly, ill never have time
to be myself, to take back what is mine

top to bottom, flake by flake
i watch my path before me as it deteriorates
now appearing before me, my greatest fears
i no i will die lonely, and that no one cares

Strand by strand, limb by limb
my life so short, ill never know what could of been
i thought my beliefs would be my strongest power
gods wrong . . I'm entering my darkest hour

cut by cut, strike after strike
my past, present and future, Pain, flashed before my eyes
Curled up in a little ball, listening to that voice
Amba, it cant be late, but you have made your choice

Bit by Bit, One by one
My now heartless body, coming undone

piece by piece, thought after thought
my feeling less body, oh so distraught

top to bottom, flake by flake
i watch my path before me as it deteriorates

Strand by strand, limb by limb
my life so short, ill never know what could of been

cut by cut, strike after strike
my past, present and future, Pain, flashed before my eyes

I used to be me,
but now so uncompleted
but needless to say, I'm Falling To Pieces

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  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    Amba!!! This poem was amazing. I didnt realize how old it was though. I loved every line of it.

    And of course I remember you!!! how could i forget my fellow hippie tree hugger wanna be!?!

    Well this is my new account. So yesh. =] I hope to hear from you soooon, again! Send me a PM whenver! TTYSOON!

    ` Glenduh.

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Wow, I really liked the last few verses of this poem, they started getting really intense! The title was well suited as well. Great job on this poem!

    P.S. I love your name!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    Drool.....that was awesome! Couple of lines didnt rhyme but my poems sometimes work like that to. Man it was good, really capturing, great job!

  • 19 years ago

    by FAKE-is-the-new-trend

    Great poem!! i luved it 5/5

    keep writing and always write from ur heart,
    $ilenlty Thinking

  • 19 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    Definatley 5/5 i love it
    your awesome at this better than ill ever be

    ~HazE