Definatley 5/5 i love it
your awesome at this better than ill ever be

~HazE

Great poem!! i luved it 5/5

keep writing and always write from ur heart,
$ilenlty Thinking

Drool.....that was awesome! Couple of lines didnt rhyme but my poems sometimes work like that to. Man it was good, really capturing, great job!

Wow, I really liked the last few verses of this poem, they started getting really intense! The title was well suited as well. Great job on this poem!

P.S. I love your name!

Amba!!! This poem was amazing. I didnt realize how old it was though. I loved every line of it.

And of course I remember you!!! how could i forget my fellow hippie tree hugger wanna be!?!

Well this is my new account. So yesh. =] I hope to hear from you soooon, again! Send me a PM whenver! TTYSOON!

` Glenduh.