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by bonnie Oct 18, 2005 category : Life, society / other
I sit on the rooftop, under the moonlight, watching the world go by, My only comfort in this cold harsh world, are the tears from my porcelain eyes. I try to hide, but have nowhere to go, I need to get away from here, Where no one knows me and no one can judge, Me and my velvet tears.***************************** ****please rate and comment**** *****if you like my poems***** *****************************
by Cory Mastrandrea
I like it, but you don't need commas after every line. Just letting you know.