by Blutonium Boy Oct 18, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Dying this instant, sounds so appealing to me, |
by Carrie
This is nicely written! i'm looking forward to read more of your work. keep it up |
by NannO
That was so heart-breaking.. i loved ur choice of words, and ur rhyme scheme, too.. that was reli gr8.. my fav part was the first two lines of the third stanza |