You left... I followed.

by Blutonium Boy   Oct 18, 2005


Dying this instant, sounds so appealing to me,
Because in life, nothing is guaranteed,
Not happiness, not glee,
I want love... And that is my plea.

That day I met you under the old willow tree,
We laid a blanket... Had sandwiches, and some tea,
We loved each other, we both agreed,
Finally once in my life, I would succeed.

They told me he had other plans,
They told me you were now in his hands,
I knew then that you were gone,
That faithful morning close to dawn...

Foolishly in life I was misled,
And now I know what real pain is like instead,
I will love you forever,
It is now my turn to enter the never,

So wish me luck on my new endeavor,
The thought of doing it scares me however,
Give me the strength to see you once again,
I'll say it just once... I love you Jen.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Carrie

    This is nicely written! i'm looking forward to read more of your work. keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by NannO

    That was so heart-breaking.. i loved ur choice of words, and ur rhyme scheme, too.. that was reli gr8.. my fav part was the first two lines of the third stanza

    "they told me that he had other plans
    that u wer now in his hands"

    absolutely terrific..
    im sorry bout ur loss, i hope ur OK.. im ther if u need anything

    keep up the strength :)
    take care
    Nannoush