Rik tht was like just wow! tht was really good, u can really imagine it. u really have a great poetic talent.

luv becca xxx
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naomi x

Omg!!! wow, love it rik!!!

:)

Dear Rik,
As always you have done a great job 5/5 Great and well written poem... always keep it up an dnever give up. Take care and luv ya lots ^_^

Great job
i love it !!

great job
5/5

Aww dat was really gwd it really drawn me in n its sad *huggles* but its brilliant..keep up the gwd work k mwa xoxox
luv dia

Sounds like what goes on in my head lol jk
I loved it lots babe keep up the great work
*HUGS*
~Tess~

Nice...Very well done and excellent scheme. Great job.
~Disturbed

Hey

Hey...all your poems are sooo good...keep it up! and this one is great too..its spooky, but deep so keep it up!!:)

Waow...so deep...a gr8 rite..its awesome...heh
...keep writin!:)
pekaboo
xxx
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mezkenzie

Wow that was really good.....i liked it a lot! mine aren't that good....wish they were but its chill. i def. like reading your poems!!!

Hey, okay so i saw ur peom and im still kinda a new member in ur friends club...so i really lyked ur poem, u seem to be a really good poet! never stop!
Much Luv,
MizDarkRoyalty

Wow! awesome poem! love your style of writing keep it up! -cheers-
^_^