Lots of feeling there. It made me think, which I suppose is a good sign.

Good Writing!
beth

Wow...its unique...i give it a 5 :D

Hey that was cool I liked it a lot! it was sweet:D great job!

I thought you did a really good job. It's very unique and easy to relate too.

I know exactly where you're coming from. I think many of us feel misunderstood a lot in our lives. You're definitely not alone.... I will be here to listen, if you need someone to listen.

(((((Big Hugs))))))

Michelle

WOW!! never seen anything like that before...you really knew what you were talking about..i have that feeling a lot! if you wonna talk you no where to reach me!! if not there you can email me...youngbabii23@aim.com xo nelle

Wow. ive said it on another one of your poems. but you really are an awesome writer, everything i have read by you, ive loved

Vey good write...
5/5
love
amy

It was almost like a song. =) But a very well written song. I loved the repetition of the lines because it brought the idea out more. And, since I read fast..when I read this outloud..it sounded cool so there's a bonus haha. Anyways, great job on this one too Dear, I just love your titles, they're all so brilliant!

5.5