The 3rd stanza is my favorite... I was captivated from begining to end. very deep and emotional write! excellent, outstanding job!!! never stop writing

Wow great poem, very thought provoking. good job:)xxx

You are a great poet! wonderful work at first i was like omg look how long it is but when i finished i was like whoa that was fast. it really captured me into it. it's a great idea! wonderful job!

~Jacklyn

Very powerful and emotional piece...well done...

hugs, love, Ann

Well written AGAIN. Feel I know you a little Holly through your poems.Hope you move on from the confusion.If you can express yourself like this then there is HOPE.

I hate saying this, but I completely understand what you mean. Being another poet, I understand the inner thoughts of your mind, the fakeness, the doubts, the depression etc etc. This exercise did you well, you have produced a beautifully deep and crafted poem that still continues to be deliciously worded. Well done!

After corresponding with you in depth, i was sure you said you couldn't write a poem that didn't rhyme. you were wrong. this is great.

Wonderful poem. 5/5