Awsome work I love how you repeated the title in the poem it works.

Wow i liked it shorter than most poems but lots of meaning keep up the work xoxo laura marie aka sweets xoxox

Love it....lots of meaning in it thats what i liked. keep up the great work
Juls

WOW SO F**HING AWSOME YET SAD AND TOUCHING! PEACE CUZZ.

You are one of great words
you are very good at expressing things in such small words