XxYou just don't knowxX

by XxCrazy4youxX   Oct 18, 2005


This life is getting to
be to much for me it's
getting harder to force this fake smile

its getting hard trying to
stay strong, with all this
pain and no more joy

How is a person to keep
going on? times are tough
and they don't seem to be getting any better

And I have yet found a sign
of hope, people just don't
understand how much pain i truly
have theres so much more to

me then what you can see
So much nobody knows i couldn't
even bare to write its so personal

**not sure if its done but please tell me what you think i'll do the same for you**

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  • 19 years ago

    by my_little_secret

    Its not ur best but it stil manages to get across ur feelings, so i would say leave it at that. Poems are normally as good as theyre gna get the first time u write them, as thats when the feeligns are most honest and raw.