Thanks for the comment

Great job!! i really liked it

That is really beautiful. I thought this poem was well expressed and well written. It has a pleasing rhyme schema and good flow.

I really liked the symbolism you chose with this poem to describe the fear of taking risks and revealing ourselves.

I would love to know what the deeper meaning of the poem is, if there is one. My assumption is based on the fact that it is in the "life and society" section, as opposed to the "nature" section, as it would be if it were only about butterflies...
Or I could be completely mistaken.

Either way, a nice poem.

Wow that was beautiful writing. i love the portrayal of the butterfly as a lot of our lives. great metaphor.