Thanks alot for the advice on my poem. This one is very very nicely writen.

and congrats to you with young authors. its pretty tough to win..

XxOo

Great poem! :) poems about life are always the best!

Ah..I can relate to this one very well,
Youve done a great job knitting your thoughts in your poem.

"When will a final purpose be found for me
When will I finally know what the future is to be
Cannot escape the pressure that resides in joy
There must be something else, something more"

This line hit me the most...