That Afternoon

by KK   Oct 18, 2005


On that late afternoon is Feburay when my life changed forever is still imprinted it my mind. like snapshot playing over and over again.the light, the sounds , the smells and the blackness. the sound of police cars, people screaming,people talking , twisted mental being cut and the sound of nothing. the smell of gas and the smell of mud. then every thing goes black and there is nothing then a light is shining, but i can't get to it. when i wake i find i am in the hospital. i wake to find yall are gone and i got left behind, but the snapshots keep playing in my mind. the snap shots still playing in my mind over and over again, after a while is gets a little easer to handle but it is still hard.

this poem was written about a car crash that claim the lives of 3 friends this is the crash through the live of the only person who lived. the crash was on Feb.14.04. We were hit head on my a drunk driver.

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  • 19 years ago

    by afrodite

    Excellent way to show your emotion and pain for your loss, youre really soulful , and i think you have a real talent for writing, always speak from your heart.x