Outstanding work I feel for you brother

Amazingly beautiful.. breath-taking and heart-capturing ryt from the start.. u shud never take breaks (or, if u think bout it that way, u shud take breaks as much as u want if it makes of the poem, u write amazing stuff lyk the one u got here :D).. i loved every single word of the poem, and ur rhyme scheme was incredible... keep up the gud work..
take care
Nannoush

'But inside I'm dying
And my heart has stopped beating
I sleep at night with my eyes open'
I really liked this part, i thought it was really powerful and it stood out the most.
5/5

xxx cici xxx

Aww wow hun I can really relate to that.. This is a great poem and it's full of emotion well done sweetie!!! 5/5