I really like the repeative idea, well done, keep up the good work. hatred is so negitive and controlling....

Heyy great poem 5/5 keep up writing
take care
Mel

Man this is a very good poem
i know how it feels

Awesome!!!
Loved it!
I liked how you kepted repeating anger, tears, and hate. It was really good!
5/5

~jana

Seems more complex when its a simplistic piece of work. i enjoyed. keep writing .