As you can see my father means a lot to me. He just turned 70 and all I can do is think if he'll see me get married or have a kid. I love him dearly. Tell me what you think of the poem, please.

Aww natalie thats really well written
its not a complecated poem
easy to read yet with such emotion you cant help feel touched 5 out of 5 and ty for your comment on my poem
cant wait to read more
lorna

I like this poem. i really care about my dad too. this poem really expresses how i feel too. very good. Amazing