Comments : My Fault (Kyrielle)

  • 19 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Gr8 poem! keep up the gr8 work! that fits me well...im amazed that u can use such large words to rhyme. That's cool! can u mayb chek out sum of my stuff??
    ~Who Cares?~

  • 19 years ago

    by Z

    Good work as usual. :

  • 19 years ago

    by Z

    Upon my second read through this line really spekls to me "I bare the pain of my own affliction ". Kinda makes you think. Excellent...

  • The Word Affliction Was Used Too Many Times In This Poem, It Was a Great Word In This Poem With Alot Of Meaning, Be Careful Not To Abuse Keywords In a Poem Sometimes, It Makes It a Bit, Predictable And Common....But Overall I Liked It xoxo-Nikki-xoxo