No One

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Oct 19, 2005


No one knew she was suicidal,
No one even cared,
No one took a notice,
On the night she whispered a final prayer.
No one saw at night,
When she cried and cried,
No one gave a f**k,
The night she died.
No one heard her fevered cries,
Begging for a saviour,
No one listened well enough,
To hear her silent whispers.
No one thought twice,
When they saw her arms,
I doubt they'd even care,
That I self harm.
No one ever sees me,
Crying to myself,
No one sees the posion,
That beckons my death.
No one sees what I see,
Each and all the days,
No one looks through my eyes,
And sees where to my mind strays.
No one understands,
This burning heart,
No one feels the shaking,
I've had from the start.
And no one cares to try,
To save this child from a mistake,
But do they notice,
The smile that's so fake.
So this night with her posion,
She lays onto the bed,
Head resting back on pillow,
Closing her eyes until she's dead.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Alexis Frank

    That I self harm.

    I loved this line, a very poetic way to say that. Nice job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    I gave you a 5/5 because it is an excellent piece but I do have to say that it is sort of confusing because when you read it, sometimes it says "her, she, ect." but then it states "I". I know that sounds confusing but I don't know how to say it.

    Ok. It talks about a person and then you talk as if it is you. I don't know. Maybe that is how it is meant to be but I found it a little confusing.

    Great poem though. I have to say, though, it was very sad to read. Keep it up though. Your poetry is great.

    >black&&blue

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    OMG, That was absolutely awesome, it was very very dark, and sad and powerful, keep writing, because you have talent
    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Torn

    Oh thats so sad:'( truly that just made me want to reach my heart out for this girl/u...i loved the twist and the story of it.
    i hate that yo feel this way, i can't believe there's so much of this in the world.
    Take care xoxo

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