Oh thats so sad:'( truly that just made me want to reach my heart out for this girl/u...i loved the twist and the story of it.
i hate that yo feel this way, i can't believe there's so much of this in the world.
Take care xoxo

OMG, That was absolutely awesome, it was very very dark, and sad and powerful, keep writing, because you have talent
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I gave you a 5/5 because it is an excellent piece but I do have to say that it is sort of confusing because when you read it, sometimes it says "her, she, ect." but then it states "I". I know that sounds confusing but I don't know how to say it.

Ok. It talks about a person and then you talk as if it is you. I don't know. Maybe that is how it is meant to be but I found it a little confusing.

Great poem though. I have to say, though, it was very sad to read. Keep it up though. Your poetry is great.

>black&&blue

That I self harm.

I loved this line, a very poetic way to say that. Nice job.