Torn to pieces

by *kAnDiE*   Oct 19, 2005


Torn to pieces
ripped to shreads
im broken and bleeding
cant you see im already dead

afraid and alone
laying on the ground
haunted by the pain trapped inside
i can no longer hide

weak and crying
tears run down my cheeks
im the one the call a freak
ive been pushed to far now
i no theres no other way

confused and not thinking
i hold the blade
im done with all this faking
i dont wanna pretend to be ok

screaming and aching
no one can hear me
as i cut
deeper and deeper i go
the blood starts to flow

cold and died
you all couldnt see
that this was the only way for me to be set free
no more pain will i have to feel
i wont anylonger be that hopeless broken girl....

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  • 19 years ago

    by Amy

    Wow. this is so deep, and so much like my poems. stay strong gal and rock on!

  • 19 years ago

    by ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆

    Very powerful, i can relate.
    5/5
    I liked the flow and rhyming structure.

    Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

    xxx cici xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    So tru 4 me...except im obviously not dead or else i woodnt b typin! GR8 poem tho! keep up the gr8 work...can u mayb chek out ne of my poems?
    ~Who Cares?~

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