How It Feels

by End Of Eternity   Oct 19, 2005


After yet another insane night
here I am on the highway of life
with those screams in my head
I am simply more than lucky to survive
I used to believe in love
I had faith above
but now I wonder if someone could see
if someone could feel
how it feels, to be me

after yet another insane night
here I am betrayed by death and life
with those screams in my head
I wonder why I survive
I used to be kind
nothing more left in me
than the hate you find
now I wonder if someone could set me free
if someone could feel
how it feels, to be me

yet another night after night
series of betrayel by death and life
I scream at my agony
if it could feel
how it feels, to be me

but life keeps drifting
from one shore to another
as if looking for company
and that's what they found in me
when they found misery
I wonder if life knows how it feels
how it feels, to be me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Elapsed

    Wow... This is brilliant.. Loved the repetition and style of this piece...

    "with those screams in my head
    I am simply more than lucky to survive
    I used to believe in love
    I had faith above"

    such a hunting read this was.. however very enjoyable..Fantastic job!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    What a wonderful poem. Very sad but moving. Great Imagery!

    now I wonder if someone could set me free
    if someone could feel
    how it feels, to be me

    I can feel how you feel :)
    What a wonderful friend you have become.
    Excellent job on this write.
    Love Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    A haunting dark piece of work.
    I don't have the words to describe this.. it was just.. so emotional and it almost seems magical. If that makes sense
    Right, i'm just going to end up rambling.
    5/5 for putting me at a loss for words
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    You know, This is the poem that made me feel as if you were writing about me. But somehow I forgot to comment on it. I read this that first day I discovered your talent and got lost in your deepness. this was the one that clicked inside and made me read more and more of your poems. So thanks to this poem I met such a wonderful person.

    Great poem indeed. Holds a very special place in my heart.

    Lots of Love
    Michelle

  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Hey...now..this is so hard 4 me 2 leave a comment...well...I can't say I understand how u feels...or maybe I do(which I think u might not agree)...well...no matter what it is...this poem is excellent...and it definitely a 5 no doubt...4 I find the words u use very good....so well..that's all...just stop I check it out..

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