Thanks for your comments.

And I like the repetition in this poem, it gets your point across!
Its more like a song and I enjoyed reading it. "After yet another insane night
here I am on the highway of life
with those screams in my head" was a great begining and really got me interested in the poem. Your a really good writer of dark poems. Im very tired and can't make a better comment im sorry, but I did enjoy your poem alot! x)

Hi dear
again i m forced to comment. awesome poem!!!!!!!
yaar are u really going thru this pain???
plz let me know. but i really hope its not so....
keep writing . i m lost in ur poems seriously.........
luv, bharti

Hey...now..this is so hard 4 me 2 leave a comment...well...I can't say I understand how u feels...or maybe I do(which I think u might not agree)...well...no matter what it is...this poem is excellent...and it definitely a 5 no doubt...4 I find the words u use very good....so well..that's all...just stop I check it out..

You know, This is the poem that made me feel as if you were writing about me. But somehow I forgot to comment on it. I read this that first day I discovered your talent and got lost in your deepness. this was the one that clicked inside and made me read more and more of your poems. So thanks to this poem I met such a wonderful person.

Great poem indeed. Holds a very special place in my heart.

Lots of Love
Michelle

A haunting dark piece of work.
I don't have the words to describe this.. it was just.. so emotional and it almost seems magical. If that makes sense
Right, i'm just going to end up rambling.
5/5 for putting me at a loss for words
*Gem*

Nitin
What a wonderful poem. Very sad but moving. Great Imagery!

now I wonder if someone could set me free
if someone could feel
how it feels, to be me

I can feel how you feel :)
What a wonderful friend you have become.
Excellent job on this write.
Love Cindy

Wow... This is brilliant.. Loved the repetition and style of this piece...

"with those screams in my head
I am simply more than lucky to survive
I used to believe in love
I had faith above"

such a hunting read this was.. however very enjoyable..Fantastic job!!