Drowning in a Pool of Sorrow

by Braxton   Oct 19, 2005


Drowning in a pool of sorrow
Realizing there's no hope
A buildup of raw emotion
feelings you can't cope
As the world comes crashing down
You feel alone and dead
The only thing left alive
Are the bad thoughts in your head
Knowing you can't control
The feelings deep inside
So what happens next?
Its time to decide
Should you console these feelings?
As they tear you from within
Or should you take a dark approach?
And commit the biggest sin
You feel the razor's edge
As it pierces through your veins
You find yourself on the floor
Screaming away the pain
You're lying there in a pool of blood
As you start to fade away
Realizing as the curtain falls
You've seen your final day......

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  • 19 years ago

    by Michelle

    Very good poem....you express yourself in a great way... you have some great words in this poem...i really really like it...but just stay strong, everything happens for a reason, u just gotta figure out why it happens...stay strong...stay positive
    love always
    michelle cavalier

  • 19 years ago

    by jac

    Wow.. well written! and it had great flow. keep it up! -peace-

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