Comments : Drowning in a Pool of Sorrow

  • 19 years ago

    by jac

    Wow.. well written! and it had great flow. keep it up! -peace-

  • 19 years ago

    by Michelle

    Very good poem....you express yourself in a great way... you have some great words in this poem...i really really like it...but just stay strong, everything happens for a reason, u just gotta figure out why it happens...stay strong...stay positive
    love always
    michelle cavalier