I waited just to long

by xX-jess-Xx   Oct 19, 2005


I waited for a lifetime,
just to feel your touch.
When i finally had you,
I valued you so much.

You were everything i dreamed,
and just a little bit more.
When i couldn't be with you,
it made my heart so sore.

You help me back on my feet,
when times were really rough.
i loved you so much for that,
but i wonder if it was enough.

Now we're being ripped apart,
I hate that its so soon.
The tears start streaming down my face,
as i sit in my empty room.

So...i cant believe they did this,
without him I'm broken inside.
But I'll never let any of them see,
the millions of tears i cried.

**its just about having to move away when you finally get that chance, u mite understand, please comment**

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  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Ooozes emotion....
    Just watch out for a few typos on "valued" etc...

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey!..great poem!...5/5! thanks for the comment on my poem!
    //.:amanda:.\\

  • 19 years ago

    by Sharon

    I like this poem a lot...it reminds me of a very beautiful song...do you write lyrics too?
    okiee~~

  • 19 years ago

    by Purple

    Nice... I'm not fully aware at this momment but a reader can get a clear sense of lose. For a while I thought some one died, but if you will never see them again or feel that then yeah... I understand how it come out as that.
    I guess the empty room and the missing piece of your life that it may repersent helps fill in some gaps. Over anylizing is fun :D. Everything that happened may seem like a dream, but it sounds like you don't want it to fade away. :D ... I smile too much :P

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