Bill I can't read your work without crying! Your "future" wife is so lucky to have you as a husband. Your love is one I admire and it gives me hope seeings how I'm so young....This was just amazing..I'm lost for words..short sweet, and beautiful! loved it!
~Chelsey~

Very good and very sweet well done

What can I say, Bill....So sweet, great job.....

Love Ann

This poems really good
there are parts that are excellent
and others it seemed that you forced
the words into the poem
but overall its really good.