This is such a sad poem! but iz gr8! lotz of emotions! keep up the gr8 work!!

Wow. I feel so bad for him! Tell him to hold on and to not let go. You're not supposed to die this early.

x3------SHELBY

Great emotions! I love it!

Very very well done

Woah! it mde me remba guyz actuli av feelngz wid a broken hart u frgt guys do av harts n its jus da odd few dat dnt so wel dne