Very nice work.. no criticism here.
~David

I loved this poem! There was a lot of emotion in it. It was sad yet beautiful! I think this is one of my favorite poems you've written. Very good!
5/5

"My vendetta causes worlds garden to fall into debris. " seems like you ran into trouble with too many syllables in this line, since you left out a 'the' that would have made the line sound a bit better. I think it should either be world's or worlds', depending on your meaning, but I'm pretty sure there should be an apostrophe.

Considering the difficult rhyme scheme, I'm impressed by how strong the message is in the poem. I liked the use of interesting words... I just read 3 poems from a different poet that wasn't much more than
"I am so sad
you hurt me real bad
I'm sad."

So this was a welcome change.

I agree, this was a difficult rhyme scheme to play with. But you did a great job with this one. Very detailed images. Creative. Also, very powerful words.