This is good.. good luck in the contest

I like it u but all ur feeling out and made it ryme and sound good i like the way u think once im gone im gone

Hmmm...I have to say that it's nice, and it rhymes, but I think that you can add more sophistaicated words than "sad, mad, etc." That would make the poem seem more meaningful. Try to be more colorful.

You're poem was very good it was very deep and meaningful, thanks for commenting my poem-good luck w/ your contest

Er...I don't know how exactly to tell you what I think. Just keep it the way it is, if you believe it exposes your feelings in the best way. That's all that matters.

I love your poem it has so much depth to you, you just let all your emotions out and in a beautiful way. Good luck with contest and with your writing.
Once I Am Gone I Am Gone

Great write