Awwwwwww

This is really cute and works well as free verse. One comment, a lot of the time you wrote 'your' it should have been 'you're' Re-read it, and if 'you are' makes sense in its place, change it to 'you're'. Good poem though. 4/5

This is a greta poem. its writte exactly as if you were writting it from experainc. is that true? and yes you do need to put "you're " in. but nice work keep writting. i felt that way one time beofer to

Oh, yeah, that is love. Nicely done, the description seems fit. If your arms are open, you will find and be loved again. I hope your heart is healing if it happened to you...

xxx

I liked this poem of yours. I look forward to reading more from you. =]

From the title of this poem I was expecting something different. Maybe one of those forced restrictive rhyming pieces? So it sort of threw me a bit when I did start to read. Anyway I'm rambling..........

The poem worked well as a whole and the emotion behind the words was clear.

Keep writing
Nici