This is really good i like it.

OMG!!!!! in the words of you...
*akhfk;ashfhdfhv;khvk;hfljh*

*speechless!* OMG~!

That is one of the best poems ive read!! wow..it just had so much emotion and ur vocab was just great. i hope that he sees your there because it seems like your love could see him through.
Take care xoxo

Great work, hunni. YOu know I'm always proud of your work. :)

Love ya!

Car

An eternity of loveless life I live
A life of love I need.

^ that part is cooooooool! :D i really like it thts my fav line! and this is a great poem sisi, i love it!
xxxx

This poem actually made me cry, truthfully i mean it.
Its so passionate i love the past stanza Its also made me shatter within cause I'm feeling like this right now...A wonderful piece of writing hope to see more!!
xoxroxyxox!!