Comments : The Reason

  • 19 years ago

    by HansRik

    This is a truly fantastic poem. It is heartfelt and very emotive. It is clear that you have found love. I like the diction, and the emphasis you have placed on your love for your boyfriend. I hope you two the very best of luck. Very well done on this poem!

  • 19 years ago

    by ***LiiL MiZz DiiVA***

    That is really good gurl damm. for real, it reminds me and my bf. i love em so much.and this poem is so true about me and him, i love it.welcome to my favorites list. 5/5

  • O myyyyy god...this is so good. i just fell in love with it...you are very talented and i hope u know that...i love the way u write...5/5..keep it up and keep in touch
    love alwayz
    PrEcIoSa

  • 19 years ago

    by Katie McCullick

    5!! I love it. It has great fluency. I have few poems you might like judging on your style so check them out if you want.

    Katie

  • 19 years ago

    by Christopher Liau

    Excellent 5/5
    the flow kept me wanting to read more

  • 19 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    Awwww, that is such a wonderful poem! Good job!!!!!!! Keep up the great work. The flow was flawless and the rhyming was great! My favorite stanza was:

    "I love to watch you sleep,
    I love to watch you rest,
    I love the way my head fits,
    So perfectly on your chest."

    wonderful job! 5/5 and well worth it!

    ~BJ~

  • 19 years ago

    by Tiny Reader

    Beautiful poem which shows your love really clearly. And I know each of the feelings you described, and I know that they are hard to write about into a decent poem so well done!

  • 19 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Aww dis was so sweet i luv it wel done keep up the gwd work.. i gave it a 5/5
    luv dia mwa xoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael Mantione

    Wow i normally don't read love poems but this is an exception this is a great poem,you must have a real bond between you and him i hope your love can withstand all the rough times ahead am remember you always have friends here to talk to.

  • 18 years ago

    by Syn

    Very good...

  • 18 years ago

    by dee

    Aww thats such a cute poem. theres really nothing better then love. my favourite parts
    The warmness in my heart for you,
    I know it must be love.
    great choice of words throughout the poem.
    dee

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Aww it's so cute. Lol. Great write. I wouldn't change much of anything... =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha