by HansRik
This is a truly fantastic poem. It is heartfelt and very emotive. It is clear that you have found love. I like the diction, and the emphasis you have placed on your love for your boyfriend. I hope you two the very best of luck. Very well done on this poem! |
That is really good gurl damm. for real, it reminds me and my bf. i love em so much.and this poem is so true about me and him, i love it.welcome to my favorites list. 5/5 |
O myyyyy god...this is so good. i just fell in love with it...you are very talented and i hope u know that...i love the way u write...5/5..keep it up and keep in touch |
5!! I love it. It has great fluency. I have few poems you might like judging on your style so check them out if you want. |
Excellent 5/5 |
Awwww, that is such a wonderful poem! Good job!!!!!!! Keep up the great work. The flow was flawless and the rhyming was great! My favorite stanza was: |
by Tiny Reader
Beautiful poem which shows your love really clearly. And I know each of the feelings you described, and I know that they are hard to write about into a decent poem so well done! |
by nadsyy
Aww dis was so sweet i luv it wel done keep up the gwd work.. i gave it a 5/5 |
Wow i normally don't read love poems but this is an exception this is a great poem,you must have a real bond between you and him i hope your love can withstand all the rough times ahead am remember you always have friends here to talk to. |
by Syn
Very good... |
by dee
Aww thats such a cute poem. theres really nothing better then love. my favourite parts |
Aww it's so cute. Lol. Great write. I wouldn't change much of anything... =) 5/5 xoxo |