by Christopher Liau Oct 19, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
With the passing of every winters day, |
Thanks, i cant believe i didnt see that typo... must have slipped through seen as been is a word. I did infact mean for it to say be. thanks again for pointing it out |
Ooo, not bad. |
by Carmen
It was all good and perfect until the last line; it just didnt sound right. otherwise, perfect. |
Excellent poem. I loved it. |
by Kayla
Wow! I don't even know what to say...I seen this on one of the forums...thought it sounded like i'd have some emotion...but I wasn't expecting this...It touched me...thats how you know its good....great Job 5/5...Keep it up...the others are good as well |