I really love this, its very well done
A perfect little child
With the purest skin
Walked into a nightmare
Of undescribable sin

Its just mind blowing. Keep it up:)

Wow that was very very good i completely love this poem its so true lol like it kinda says liek how it satsrts off like how it is wow keeo up the good work emma im lovin in

lots of lvoe
☼Becky☼

The deepest, darkest secret
Becomes a last embrace

I like that bit. Its wicked. well dun ham xx

THIS IS AMAZING DAMNIT

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Lol, thanku stabby!!hehe, and every1, u are all great!! luv u xxx

Very nicely written. Loved the strength of your words and images. I loved the second stanza the most.

Wow this was really good. I liked the way you described things in this poem. 5/5

Hi Well I am not going to leave many comments on poems and such.
Cause most of the stuff I read here is well written. Nomatter if they rhyme or have good stanza. Because our feelings never go by really any rules.

But anyway I have read some comments of yours and well one question. What Does the X thing you do mean?

Thanku for ur comments guys, they are much appreciated :)

em xx (kiss kiss...as in a thanku for commenting sign of affection etc etc...incase u wern't joking! its a girly thing..dont worry!)

thanks again every1! x

Wow, great, great poem I realllllly love it. It's so cool and wonderful. ^__^ Good job, hun.

Awesome poem....sad but good.