The Girl In My Mirror

by felicia   Oct 19, 2005


* This is not really a poem but it is something I wrote and it explains a lot about me if you don't know me*

There's a girl in my mirror staring back at me.
And the girl in my mirror has a wonderful story she may never get to tell.
And the girl in my mirror has the saddest eyes that could be.
And the girl in my mirror just happens to be me.
The girl in my mirror is fading away. The girl in my mirror is fading away.

There's a girl in my mirror staring back at me.
And the girl in my mirror has a wonderful story she finally got to tell.
And the girl in my mirror now has the happiest eyes that could be.
And the girl in my mirror just happens to be me.
And the girl in my mirror will never fade away.
And the girl in my mirror will never fade away.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Felicia

    Hey that was good cheak some of my stuff out e-mail me at gooft_ckick_2010@yahoo.com my name is felicia

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Its interesting. but frankly it doesnt hit me. i dont really get what is going on at all. There is also a lot of repeating which i know you do on purpose. i like how you made the stanzas opposites though. maybe add more into the lines. show a little more of what you are refering to. well just my thoughts.

  • 18 years ago

    by jello

    Ahhh cute.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lia Jnell

    That was really cute girl! I like it. Just always be yourself, and life will take it away from there. Be true. Much love

  • 18 years ago

    by Erika

    That's cute I liked it, I like poems that rhyme better than ones that don't but I liked that one nice job, and thanks for the comment

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