Our Hearts Beat Together

by Katie McCullick   Oct 19, 2005


Sing your song to me. Take my mind from this world. I don't want to feel this any more. I want every breath that comes from you and every word in your song to carry me away to a further place, beyond this one, where I can smile because im happy and not because I think I need to. I want to know that here and now is exactly meant to be and this moment couldn't be any better. I want to feel the beat of the music going with the beat of our hearts together. I need the words of the music to flow like poetry that speaks to my soul. All I want is to be loved like those who write the songs that make the hair on the back of my neck rise. The beauty of the thought makes me want to go on. It makes me want to stay alive just for all these dreams to come true. It makes me want to wait for the one who can make these dreams come true. If only...

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  • 19 years ago

    by amelia

    Wow !!
    5/5
    this could be broken down to stanzas
    is a wonderful
    deep
    romantic piece
    love
    amy

  • 19 years ago

    by HansRik

    I like this a lot. It is written in prose form and yet it contains the beauty of versified lines. The diction, imagery and structure are all excellent and help to develop meaning. Well done indeed!

  • 19 years ago

    by Razorblade Lies

    I think this poem flows rather smoothly. I really enjoyed reading it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Christopher Liau

    Its a little difficult to read, but the point is put across solidly