by sarah Oct 20, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
family
Sometimes i stop and think of all the times you've all said you cared. |
by JJ
These are some great lines. very true, sometimes, we all need friends... awesome job! |
This is a great piece(in fact it could fit along side my "And Always I dream Alone').It is so simply and honestly written.A nice flow to it.Perhaps it could use a bit touching up but the message and the underlying emotion make it a strong, heartfelt piece of work. |
by aaron c s
Good poem. so true too. 5/5 |
by Matt Carroll
I know just how you feel, you've put it just right. Beautiful piece, keep it up Sarah, for your talents will take you to heights you've never dreamed of... |