Push it aside

by sarah   Oct 20, 2005


Sometimes i stop and think of all the times you've all said you cared.
sometimes i stop to listen to all of your fading prayers.
sometimes i love more than i recieve.
sometimes i wish you only payed any attention to me.
sometimes i will offer you my friendship.
sometimes you'll stomp, and kick and then forget it.
sometimes and now and forever all i ever wanted.
sometimes all someone needs is a friend

not so great but im really kinda feelin a little upset. after all the love and care i offer them people they just push it away like a bubble gum rapper after they spit their gum in it. a church is people who gather to worship god together (not a building ...)

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  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    These are some great lines. very true, sometimes, we all need friends... awesome job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is a great piece(in fact it could fit along side my "And Always I dream Alone').It is so simply and honestly written.A nice flow to it.Perhaps it could use a bit touching up but the message and the underlying emotion make it a strong, heartfelt piece of work.

  • 19 years ago

    by aaron c s

    Good poem. so true too. 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Matt Carroll

    I know just how you feel, you've put it just right. Beautiful piece, keep it up Sarah, for your talents will take you to heights you've never dreamed of...