by Aurora Oct 20, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
You could call me over, aways should you compromise, walk away and don't say a word, keep to whisper,keep your word, don't lie, don't cheat, maybe then you'd be mine. |
by Rolo
It didn't deserve a 1 vote...but it could use a little work. As I said in your other poem, structure your poem. Make it clear to the reader. Maybe broaden your ideas. Anyhow..keep writing and you'll get better. |