by Aurora Oct 20, 2005
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Tell me just once more, i still don't understand, why are you untrue to me, cant you quit being so unfair. |
by Rolo
Hm, I think you should structure it better....it might make it easier to read. The overall idea was pretty good..but like I said structure the lines and I think it will be better. Not bad, you have potential...just keep writing. |