by LiL One Dec 6, 2003
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
As I peered across the room at the party, |
Really good poem, it makes you sad thinking that rape is real in life. |
There was a good message in your poem. Good work. |
thats good I do like it like you said I would but it just makes me thing how dirty some guys can be |
Awsome work gurl,jess |
by KeEzY
THIS ONE WAS REALLY GOOD I LIKED THE VICTIM ONE BETTER SO THAT YOU COULD SEE REALLY WHAT SHE WAS GOING THROUGH BUT AGAUN I AM VERY SORRY FOR YOUR FRIEND |