Wow that was real nice especialy i love the last part dat's cute never heard dat before ! thanx for ya comment on my poem Living in hte past thanx alot! i gave you a 5 cuz dis is good but then again all your poems are (i still smile evrytime i see ur lil cartoon is so cute) =)

That was just perfect. So relative. Plz c/m mine 2. But this was wonderful! You have real talent.

This is a very good poem... at some point when i was with me ex i felt like this... well good job and keep it up...

I can so relate to this poem aswell im going through it now....it sucks balls its so confusing

neways i really like all ur poems ive read so far ive read the featured 1s and nw im guna read the rest....

im going to add u to my favourites
xoxo
allana

p.s um culd u do me a favour......culd u take a looke at mine i wana know wat people think of them thanks