Sunny, this is the type of feedback I need to become better. I took the last 22+ years off from writing and I truly want to become better at what I do. This beats the hell out of the usual comments I read. Thank you my friend. I will tweak it as time allows. I have not been happy with it, but your input has given me direction. Thank you.

Wow! through words you managed to paint the loveliest picture...absolutely beautiful, from beginning to end. amazing job! great write

(PS. thanks for the suggestion on my poem. really appreciate it.)

Ive been reading some more of the poems on this site, and to be honest, at the moment theyre all a bit crap. but i like this one. it has some really good lines and ouve created such a goood atmosphere

Bill....You painted a beautiful picture. The flow just perfect. This is one of the most beautiful nature poems I've read in a while. I'm speechless....
Excellent Work....

Love Ann**

Bill,

This write is excellent and such a beautiful picture you have painted with your words. This is truly one of the better nature poems that I have read in a long long time.

regards,

Steve

Aww.. that was such a sweet dedication.. everything in this poem was beautiful, the words, the rhyme, and even the flow :D:P it was very emotional and ur words expressed it just ryt.. i adored ur last stanza..
gr8 job! keep up the talent
Nannoush

Nice poem! Keep it up!

Beautiful!!!