by Joey Matthews Oct 20, 2005
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Surrounded by trees |
by Justin
Wow.. beautiful.. that was really good, I liked the words you used, "Freedom in movement" "I see a deeper paradise", this poem really helped form a picture in my head, and I just loved the structure and everything about it, I really should start reading this type of poems more, but so breathtaking, great job, 5/5, |