Aww *huggles* wow i'm lyk speechless lol..soz though.. gwd work though
take care kk
mwa luv ya xoxox

Wow that was awesome, i'm glad you didn't give in! And i'm glad i met you and read this!!Twas great!

Lots of love!
Steph

Thats a good one...
Keep it up.!!!
5/5

Wow ur really amazing in your wording...thanx for askin me to read ur a great writer...keep it up...

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It was really good... it needs to have some commas and it seems very, unorganized. Its a bit hard for me to read (As weird as that sounds) cause I dont know where sentences end and stuff... like instead of this

I walk through the shadow of death for I see no fear and the light of life is not visible so therefore the path is unknown & maps are invisible so therefore there is no guide toward this destination.

Try making it:

I walk through the shadow of death,
For I see no fear, and the light of life is not visible,
So therefore, the path is unknown, & maps are invisible,
So therefore, there is no guide toward this destination.

If u pause where the commas r, it gives your poem a rhythm and makes it more organized looking and easier to read, it flows off the tongue a bit better lol. And it also sometimes helps if u make sections of 4 lines and then put an empty line and then another 4 or how ever many u want. Other then all that I loved the point u got across in ur poem and the words u chose good job=)

Thats good, great job. Amie

WORK OF ART!! I love it hun. Very well done. Keep it up!
Julie

That gave me hope--at least someone knows how i feel.....i love it......
**JOLENE**

I loved it you have crazy skills.

Wow, this is amazing!
I love the way you wrote it, because it starts off vry dark and gradually becomes more positive.

It has a great meaning to it, and I'm sure it has benifited many who have read it.

Take care,
Much love,
Riffy xx.

Reminds me of a poem calld the valley of the shadow of death. gr8 messge and true that light will always expell the darkness n reveal what is hidden. look how much a candle stands out in a dark room...notice how wen we are stranded ina tunnel we follow the light...it will always be there and we will always follow searching for it....i think u expressed this concept brilliantly 10/10 :-)

I love your poems you have such a gift and passion for your poems. Keep writing I'll keep reading.